Nice job! Your theme comes to life and your plan reads very different now.
I think the images will help you to take the design to the next level- here are some ideas: - the "water feature" seems large. build bridges/islands to animate it. You have the architectural language for it and the intimate scale of some of your images call for a similar scale in your project. - think about larger groups of people, couples and individuals (scale) - why is the greenery only of the higher level? could it be integrated with the stair idea to become another link between the two main levels?
You will have an exciting project if you incorporate some of spacial generosity that the images imply into your design.
I really like the images you chose for this board. They really show what you are trying to accomplish. Basically, not hiding in the bushes watching somebody, but blatantly watching somebody.
It took me a little while to figure out what you were trying to accomplish, but it came out perfectly. You basically had an image for many aspects of your site showing where people could watch from and showing what they would be looking at. I really like that.
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Chris,
Nice job! Your theme comes to life and your plan reads very different now.
I think the images will help you to take the design to the next level- here are some ideas:
- the "water feature" seems large. build bridges/islands to animate it. You have the architectural language for it and the intimate scale of some of your images call for a similar scale in your project.
- think about larger groups of people, couples and individuals (scale)
- why is the greenery only of the higher level? could it be integrated with the stair idea to become another link between the two main levels?
You will have an exciting project if you incorporate some of spacial generosity that the images imply into your design.
Enno
Chris -
I really like the images you chose for this board. They really show what you are trying to accomplish. Basically, not hiding in the bushes watching somebody, but blatantly watching somebody.
It took me a little while to figure out what you were trying to accomplish, but it came out perfectly. You basically had an image for many aspects of your site showing where people could watch from and showing what they would be looking at. I really like that.
Keep it up…
Chad
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